What do you think about this free verse poem? - free russian bare still image
It's on the feet and try to reconcile
His feelings, his body.
In the shade, "he said gently laid it in his vision,
I wish it was the Russian doll took his leave, his body lying on the floor.
His blood is now spinning like the wings of a bird in Desert Storm,
And his skin is covered and managed by the wooden table with snow foam, with bare and empty.
He promised answers withdrawal had been completed,
This silence questions.
As his body leaves kisses blonde neutral eyes are lost in a lost world
His head is down there, and your mind is disturbed with it,
She is too young for them, he said,
And it remains a mark on the wooden table
One way to find your way back to RussiaMisery and happiness without love.
Friday, February 19, 2010
Free Russian Bare Still Image What Do You Think About This Free Verse Poem?
2 comments:
I agree with Mogwei and declared that "Lost in a lost world" amateur.
Simplicity is often the greatest impact, and it affects your poem certainly has a positive of course!
I am new to poetry, but properly interpreted and a recent announcement. So, take the bull by the horns, he read me a suicide pact? Or is perhaps a scene from "Romeo and Juliet in Romeo killed himself believing Juliet dead, wakes up and finds Romeo dead, she is committing." Complicated! But that's life.
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